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Re: Help! It's dark and scary and i can hear voices laughing!
Hey Drakoe, my name is Esther! Welcome to YWS. It's so great here, really. One of the best sites out there for young writers. I must admit that YWS is ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Draw Near To Me
Hey Allie! First off, I am a horrible person for not getting to you faster. I've been busier than a bee, but I should stop excusing myself. Sorry. Anyway, let's ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Beware the Ides of March: Free Literary Work Day
quel horreur! No! It's Free Literary Work day and I have to go to bed! Maybe it will last long enough in tomorrow and after school so I get the ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Empty Grave
'Ello, Echoes! How're you today? Let's get onto the review! This was so sweet and uplifting. It may be not complicated but I think it doesn't need to be. The ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: We All Are Birds. (Chap. 3)
Hello there! I'm so incredibly sorry for not getting to your story sooner...things came up. I'm not one to complain about life's complexities, so I am just going to say ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Hi everyone! I'm new here!
Hey Shanelle, Welcome to YWS! (Just in case you needed a splash of color.) YWS is really a nice place. Nearly everyone here is friendly and willing to help you ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: We All Are Birds. (Chap. 2)
Hey Once! Sorry I took so long to get back to this...schoolwork takes sometime. Anyway, I'm going to lather my love for this chapter all over the next paragraph. Squeeeeee! ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Animal Farm/Gilgamesh Outline
Hello Bookworm! Esther Sylvester here to review as requested! Okay. I am very fond of Animal Farm and Gilgamesh, so when I saw that this was your topic I got ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: Morgan's Lullaby
Hey Matt, welcome to YWS. I'm Esther; it's a pleasure. I'm not quite experienced in poetry, but I'll give it my best! I really liked this. Short and sweet and ...
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: We All Are Birds. (Chap. 1)
Hey Once! Sorry I took so long. Here is the review! I really enjoyed this a lot. It was great first chapter because it has all of the good qualities: ...
Mar 3, 2011 -
Re: the star who couldnt twinkle
Hey! Here's Esther to review as promised! Okay, I like this a lot. It's simple, like a fairy tale, but suprisingly it as emotional attachment. But listen, grammar is the ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: ~ Reviews from the Dynamic Duo ~
Hello there! I was wondering if the Duo would take the time to review a short story of mine. It's a little long, but it would be lovely if you ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Paper Hearts And Bagels Pt2
AUTHOR'S NOTE This is the second part to my entry! If you read and or reviewed the first part thanks so much! Part 4 Hearts were strewn everywhere. On the ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Paper Hearts And Bagels Pt. 1
AUTHOR'S NOTE: This is part one of my short story for Teardrop's cool contest. It's really big and rough, but it goes fast and if you review it I promise ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Sharks: When the Predator Becomes Prey
'Ello, Mello! I'm Esther and your little article caught my eye, so here I am. *sparkles* First off, I love your title. It let's the reader know exactly what this ...
Feb 27, 2011
